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Molly Densem Fairfield intermediate school Hamilton

Friday 26th June 2009

Fairfield Intermediate School Chartwell Hamilton

Dear Mr Noble, Hello, __I’m (I am) molly densem__ I am a year 7 student and am in room 23. My teacher is Miss Crawford, who I enjoy. My main sport is hockey and I also am representing for Hamilton __witch__ takes up most of my weekends. I am also swimming at Fairfield club, my swimming instructor is Ben. You might __no__ my sister Emma who came here last year and is now a year 9 at Diocesan.

My learning goals are to memorise Math strategies so __it’s (it is )__ easier to work out addition and subtraction __witch__ I am still trying to achieve now. But __I’m (I am)__ not really confident in fractions and decimals and that is what I want to get better at. At the moment, in our class, we are working on doubles. Example: 52 + 48 = you go 52 and take of the 2 and add it onto the 48 witch gets you to 50 + 50=100 and there you have your answer.

My experiences include the school camp. The over night camps were a blast. We got to cook our own food, we even got to go for a swim in the river __witch__ was freezing. The thing that I __didn’t__ like at camp was the walks! It was alright after the 2, one but the 3rd one was __tiering__ and it felt like I __couldn’t__ walk another step. __One day I was at school and a girl fell of the inter challenge and onto the bark head first she got a concussion witch is a head injury. (What does this have to do with camp?)__

Things that we need to improve on the school is put padding underneath the inter challenge so we could have prevented that girl from getting a concussion. We should have more muftis or discos __witch__ will increase our fundraising __witch__ means we have the money to improve the school. We could get a sport teacher because it means the teachers __don’t__ have to be more busier than they already are and it will take a load of __there__ work.

Next year I would like to be a house leader for Ruapehu and I would still like to have Mrs Crawford for a teacher and be in the same class with my same friends.

Yours sincerely, Molly Densem

//__Miss Crawford - A great letter, Molly. I love the way you described the strategy that you have learned in Numeracy. You have used the word which (witch) heaps - could you find a synonym to use? You also need to change the contraction to fell words__//

Molly Densem Fairfield intermediate school Hamilton

Friday 26th June 2009 Fairfield Intermediate School Chartwell Hamilton

Dear Mr Noble Kia ora I’m Molly Densem I am a year 7 student and am in room 23, my teacher is Miss Crawford who I enjoy. My main sport is hockey and I am also representing for Hamilton, it takes up most of my weekends and I am swimming at Fairfield club, my swimming instructor is Ben. You might know my sister Emma who came here last year and is now a year 9 at Diocesan.

My learning goals are to memorise Math strategies’ so it is easier to work out addition and subtraction but I am still trying to achieve that now. But I am not really confident in fractions and decimals and that is what I want to get better at. At the moment in our class we are working on doubles. Example: 52 +48 = you go 52 and take of the 2 and add it onto the 48 witch gets you to 50 + 50=100 and there you have your answer.

My experiences are the school camp for example the over night camps were a blast we got to cook our own food. We even got to go for a swim in the river; it was so freezing. The thing that I did not like at camp was the walks, it was alright after the second one but the third one was tiring and it felt like I could not walk another step. Another one of my experiences was, one terrible day I was at school and a girl fell of the inter challenge and onto the bark head first she got a concussion which is a head injury.

Things that we need to improve on the school is put padding underneath the inter challenge, we could have prevented that girl from getting a concussion if there was padding there. We should have more mufti’s or discos witch will increase our fundraising, it will mean we have the money to improve the school and we could get a sport teacher, this means the teachers would not have to be more busier then they already are and it will take a load off their work.

Next year I would like to be a house leader for Ruapehu and I would still like to have Miss Crawford for a teacher and be in the same class with my same friends. Yours sincerely Molly Densem