mirror+writing

Mirror writing The young girl __starring__ back at me looks familiar. She always wears her hair tied back with scruffy caramel and goldilocks blonde at the front. Her eyes are like the d in diamond and like the p in peacock, they have light blue that shimmers in the light with a tint of grey. Her eyebrows are as bushy as a jungle, with honey coloured and chocolate brown in them. Her beautiful lips are pink like a strawberry and they __were (are)__ cracked like she’s been sitting in the sun all day. She was brought to the earth in the year 1997 in __meloubourne__, __Were__ she no longer lives. She has had very dangerous and exciting memoires, like when her sister and her had to go for a run along the beach. Her dad said a short run, they agreed. They lost time running along the beach with the golden sand and the sunset blazing into their eyes. The shells crunching at their feet. They were running to the agreed meeting place. They could see their dad with his eyes __starring__ at them like a lightning bolt in the ice-cold night. I(Molly) could feel the words coming out before they even came out 'YOU'RE GROUNDED'. Her ambitions for the future are to become a well known lawyer, even though she may not be the best at maths or the best at speaking in front of a crowd. She just has to work hard. Her dad said, “you can do any thing you want if you put your mind to it”. So far her favourite subject is reading.

As I looked in the mirror I realised I was late for school.

You do have a few spelling errors that you have to correct, though!__**
 * __Miss Crawford: You have used some wonderfully descriptive language in your memory - I like the part about the shells crunching at your feet...very cool!